This felt like more of a fast paced animatic than an animation. The line quality of the characters and backgrounds needs to be thinner and less rough looking. The perspective, foreshortening, and camera angles during the fight scenes were good.
This felt like more of a fast paced animatic than an animation. The line quality of the characters and backgrounds needs to be thinner and less rough looking. The perspective, foreshortening, and camera angles during the fight scenes were good.
Thanks for the feedback!!!!
Animation and video quality was good. Excessively violent and kind of short. i liked the end because the white guy who was running away looked like silvester stallone.
it´s Rocky...
Animation didn't match up with the fast pace of the audio. Didn't understand what they were talking about. I wished it was longer. It was getting interesting towards the end.
It was meant to be longer, but you wouldn't have liked it anyway. The two final parts I had planned for the video were completely separate from what happened at the end. They would have just been extra skits.
The animation was really good but I wish the character designs were a bit more detailed and a little less rough looking.
That would have been awesome. Originally I was going to use more detailed designs, however I quickly realized how much more time the whole thing would take to make. I tried to focus on constant movement instead of having pretty screanshots. But I get what you're saying, link usually looks like a fuking badas and here he sorta looks like a lvl 1 rpg character.
Reminded me of shows like Squidbillies, and Aqua teen hungerforce. It had that late night 2:30am adultswim vibe. I liked the creepy humor and characters. Really Good.
Exactly! You da man. More to come...
That caterpillar with nipples was funny. The subtitles were random and hilarious. I felt like I was watching some messed up cartoon from back in the day. Overall, very funny and well made.
thank you very much, ya the over sized nipples on angry pete (worm cock) crack me up cause its a reference to the one jonah brother who has the huge man nipples.
Animation, camera angles, and video quality are excellent. I liked the story. It was very original and had good humor.
What really got my attention was the girls facial expressions. It added a lot of warmth and personality to the story. I can't wait to see the next episode.
Thanks! I've been trying to make my characters more emotive with each project. Of course, it's easy to focus on animating your main character's face when most of the remaining cast are wearing gas masks ;)
I couldn't tell what was coming out of that turkeys butt hole. A bird or something? Made me laugh. animation was ok but it fit well with the story. I liked it, very funny.
Thank you. :D
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