Everyone's just sticking their head in the hole.
Compared to other "madness" cartoons, this ones pretty lacking.
Not enough violence and it was very short.
Everyone's just sticking their head in the hole.
Compared to other "madness" cartoons, this ones pretty lacking.
Not enough violence and it was very short.
Maybe maybe....
Wasn't expecting that at the end.
I'm really liking that background music, it really sets the mood.
Great backgrounds and designs.
I thought that bubble animation in the beginning was really cool.
Good animation.
Wish there was more to it... an ending that was just as climactic as the beginning.
Thank you for the feedback! It’s a cartoon short, there’s going to be a part 2. I think the ending has humor in the irony of the story. He’s sent on this grand majestic mission then dies at the end. But yeah it’s kinda set up for part 2, TBD. Thank you again, Chris!
Animation is between bad and ok, so its like "eh".
The music "sort of" matches with the animation.
My favorite sites that have the best music without copyright issues are
Incompetech.com and Bensound.com.
The audio quality isn't good
Character designs and backgrounds are really bad.
care to provide any actual feedback, or are you just going to say "it was bad"
Because that sir is your opinion, and one I disagree with
Ok animation.
Cheesy story.
Bad video quality.
Bad designs.
Thank you for you very constructive critcism
i REALLY appreciate it......
I liked the opening and ending song.
Story is ok, kind of funny.
Designs and backgrounds lack detail.
Thanks for the comment. I usually try to add more detail to my backgrounds, though with this series in particular, I told myself to start calming down on the amount of detail.
I think the story wasn't the best in this one either... but I'm quite happy with the Episode 4 story! Go check that one out?
Reminded me of my past when I use to watch that show.
Decent dialogue and voice acting.
Wish there was better animation that that pixel stuff.
Thanks, serious sprite animation needs to come back to this site.
A good story that was easy to follow.
Animation is ok.
The main character design looked a little weird.
Not a lot of variation in color scheme.
I was trying to figure out what to correct, Thanks for your observations are realy helpfull
A fun story.
Good characters.
Wish the animation was better.
It needs more but still good.
Thank you for the feedback ^^
With each animation, I get a little better, I'm still on the path of learning xD
I liked the background.
Character designs looked lazy
Animations ok.
Story was kind of corny but clever.
It's not allowed to like backgrounds in the country where nothing is allowed.. It's also not allowed to give less than 5 stars but since you don't live there, I can't do much... Damn.. :-)
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