Lipsync and 2D animation looks good.
Character designs need a lot of improvement.
Lipsync and 2D animation looks good.
Character designs need a lot of improvement.
Thanks, thats actually my "Screenplay" not my actual version.
lol,
Looks a little like Hinata from Naruto.
Lol Thanks (wasn't trying to go for that...)
Good and interesting anime..ish character design.
The story ideas you were presenting all have potential. They just need to be fleshed out and refined.
That background is copyrighted material along with those screenshots showing up on the corner of the screen.
If you want to be a professional animator, film maker, Youtuber, etc.
You have to respect copyright.
Present your own work and not copyrighted material.
It doesn't matter if the drawings are bad (not saying that yours are).
Its your creation, and if you keep working on it and don't give up you'll achieve amazing things.
Yes I understand, that background is a placeholder (thanks for the concern.) Yes, thanks for the comment!
Some nice smooth 2D animation.
Funny characters.
Thanks for your thoughtful response and for paying so much attention!
First person ever to refer to the eye character by his first name! It's the second one: the doctor thought that removing the eye was the best way to go. Sorry for the late reply; just joined Newgrounds and I didn't realize people were commenting
Felt like I was watching someone play an old super nintendo game.
Really nice 2D animation and character designs.
Ah thanks man! Glad it came out okay :D
The animation style and color scheme isn't the most detailed or realistic, but your work has its own special unique characteristics and charm.
Your quickly becoming one of my favorite up and coming animator's on newgrounds.
The stories and plot in your animations aren't very complicated but their funny, warm, and has a lot of personality.
The title "HOT OLD LADY ACTION!!!".
Sounds like a porno, so it makes you want to click on it.
Clever Idea.
Great Stuff and can't wait to see more.
Hey thanks Chris, you know I'm always trying to put some elaborate plot in my films but can never quite get it. I'm actually surprised its got such a good rating despite there being so much talent here....Thanks for the kind words!
Very cool.
It looks great.
the animation, colors, and background look very nice.
Thank you! :)
Great Story-telling skills.
This was a lot of fun to watch.
hey, thank you so much :D
What really got my attention, were the colors and brightness.
I'd really like to to walk around and experience that world you made in your animation.
Funny and great characters.
Was a lot of fun to watch.
Thanks ChrisMckiernan!
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