This felt like more of a fast paced animatic than an animation. The line quality of the characters and backgrounds needs to be thinner and less rough looking. The perspective, foreshortening, and camera angles during the fight scenes were good.
This felt like more of a fast paced animatic than an animation. The line quality of the characters and backgrounds needs to be thinner and less rough looking. The perspective, foreshortening, and camera angles during the fight scenes were good.
Thanks for the feedback!!!!
funny
Animation was ok. Designs, backgrounds, and effects could have been more detailed or colorful. Overall, It was a nice Christmas themed animation.
Nice drawings. Showing images at 2 or 3 second intervals isn't really an animation.
im sorry, there is no other category i can put them in from what i know, bu thank you fore the helpful advice, ill start animating these memes instead ^^
Typical madness cartoon. No audio except for a gunshot. very short.
Bro is short
I loved the dialogue and the music, really funny. Character designs could've been more detailed and the lip sync should be slower or smoothed out more. Overall, I enjoyed this.
The stop-motion animation was ok. I really wished there was music of some kind or audio. It would make it much more interesting. I also wished it was at a minute or two longer.
For your first animation this was an excellent start. The planet background was nice. The character designs were not very detailed but that's alright. The animation itself needed to be a little smoother and slower in some parts. I liked the camera angles and quick cuts. The story was simple but great.
Hilarious. I liked how you use trumps audio from his speeches. Animation was rough but fit well with the movie.
I've been watching your videos on newgrounds for years and I'm always looking forward to the next crazy, perverted, out-there video. Your animation and video quality is great for a flash animation. I love the character designs, facial expressions, amazing one-liners, randomness, and gross stuff in every video.
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