ChrisMckiernan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Futurism]

The "chalky" animation style was cool.

[Home Renovations]

I love the rough style and the animation quality.
Great Animation.
Interesting story too.

[The Dark Harvest - Episode 1]

Professional looking stuff.
I can see this on late nights on cartoon network.

[The Legend of Zelda Snake Waker]

Good animation and voice acting.

[Interface | Episode 10]

I like the mood, red lighting, and creepy atmosphere.
The animations minimalistic style is interesting and matches well with everything else.

Line quality needs to be thinner.
The outlines on the characters and backgrounds looked way too thick and "grainy"

Next time,
I'd strongly recommend maybe brightening up the characters so you can make out the details on their face.

[Kitty-Kat Noodle-Attack!]

The animation was pretty good.

Not a lot of color, and the entire animation seemed kind of "bland" and "flat".

jza963 responds:

Thank you for the feed back

[Broken Hand: No Evil 032]

The story and plot are interesting, and it keeps your attention.

The animation is good.

Character designs and backgrounds look very rough and unfinished.

[Candy Catastrophe - Mimi Moment]

The voice acting and character designs are excellent.

Not sure if your trying to go for the same style as "Foamy and Germaine".
But I'd recommend adding in between frames and making the animation smooth.

[PAPERTHIN: Rebels Chapter 12]

Backgrounds and designs are nice.
Animation was good during the fight scenes, though could use some more frames to make it look smoother.

Audio needs to be cleaned up.
Plot wasn't very interesting.

AguRex responds:

Thanks a lot for your feedback. I'm currently working on the next chapter.

I'm still new at storytelling in films. Hope to improve more in the future.
😊