Her head is shaking too much as shes talking.
You need thinner line quality on the outlines of the characters.
Her head is shaking too much as shes talking.
You need thinner line quality on the outlines of the characters.
Pretty intense.
That's a serious firefight.
You need to improve on your lipsync animations.
Make more mouth movements instead of the character constantly opening and closing his mouth and smiling.
hmmm...
Don't know what to say about this...
animation is decent.
A goofy song.
The animation and designs were good.
this was funny.
Designs are flat.
Animation needs improvement.
OK :)
You got talent. This was great.
Hey thanks
Good animation and it was interesting.
Goes by fast.
It should be a requirement in our public schools that this video be shown to kids.
The lesson it teaches...is so important.
Line quality needs to be thinner on characters.
Video quality and dialogue are excellent.
The sound effects are corny.
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