I love the rough style and the animation quality.
Great Animation.
Interesting story too.
I love the rough style and the animation quality.
Great Animation.
Interesting story too.
Professional looking stuff.
I can see this on late nights on cartoon network.
Good voice acting.
Animation, designs, and backgrounds are ok.
Good animation and voice acting.
I like the mood, red lighting, and creepy atmosphere.
The animations minimalistic style is interesting and matches well with everything else.
Line quality needs to be thinner.
The outlines on the characters and backgrounds looked way too thick and "grainy"
Next time,
I'd strongly recommend maybe brightening up the characters so you can make out the details on their face.
The animation was pretty good.
Not a lot of color, and the entire animation seemed kind of "bland" and "flat".
Thank you for the feed back
The story and plot are interesting, and it keeps your attention.
The animation is good.
Character designs and backgrounds look very rough and unfinished.
The voice acting and character designs are excellent.
Not sure if your trying to go for the same style as "Foamy and Germaine".
But I'd recommend adding in between frames and making the animation smooth.
Backgrounds and designs are nice.
Animation was good during the fight scenes, though could use some more frames to make it look smoother.
Audio needs to be cleaned up.
Plot wasn't very interesting.
Thanks a lot for your feedback. I'm currently working on the next chapter.
I'm still new at storytelling in films. Hope to improve more in the future.
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This was ok.
I liked the animation style.
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