ChrisMckiernan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Dance of Blood under the Moonlight]

The subtle background music fit well with the mood of the video. An amazing drawing, very clean and colorful. My favorite part was the light reflecting off her hair. My only gripe was the constant zooming in and out and shaky camera.

JThunderProductions responds:

ValeriaKitten made a similar comment; I'm still going through the settings of OBS, trying to figure out something better. How I work is generally zooming in a lot erasing tiny overlays of other lines, colors, etc..., so to fix it might just be a capture of a separate window of what I'm working on. If I only cap that, you'll see the progress and some zoom, but that's it. I could do what Norasuko does, but that does, also, eat up computer performance (and mine, while awesome, could sure use an upgrade).

To be sure, I'll be experimenting with different setups!

[Zero Saves the Day 3]

The drawings, lip sync, and animation is between ok and mediocre. You would have gotten a higher rating if there was more audio besides dialogue, a background, and some color or shading. Not bad though:)

PretentiousPerson responds:

What would you suggest I do?

[RWBY Animation - Death of Weiss Schnee Complete Edition]

This felt like more of a fast paced animatic than an animation. The line quality of the characters and backgrounds needs to be thinner and less rough looking. The perspective, foreshortening, and camera angles during the fight scenes were good.

maxell149 responds:

Thanks for the feedback!!!!

[TD-The Punishment]

funny

[Sailboat]

The stop-motion animation was ok. I really wished there was music of some kind or audio. It would make it much more interesting. I also wished it was at a minute or two longer.