ChrisMckiernan's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Bob's Life - Episode 1 (Full)]

The story is original but not very interesting.
The humor is cheesy and it doesnt hold your attention for more than a moment.

The dialogue and the lipsync animation is matched pretty well but it moves too fast and it doesnt seem that you have enough mouth shapes to cover certain vowels and constanants.

But the animation on everything else looks very stiff.
An example of that would be in the beginning when the characters are talking.
theres no movement at all while their mouth is moving its just fast lipsync pasted on to a still character model.

Usually with good character animation the head would move a bit to the left or right or shrink and expand in order to show expression, to show them breathing.
Or the eyes and mouth would move slightly up, down, left, right, or diagnol on the face in order to show the direction that the characters are looking
In other words, It makes them seem more realistic and relatable and to show their living and breathing characters.
Though,
you seemed to have corrected that a bit in the last two or three scenes when the characters are talking in the board room.

Other than that,
I can tell you put a lot of effort in to this and it definitely shows.
But I strongly recommend that you animate your characters more and work on your story.
This has good potential:)

engageanimation responds:

Thanks for writing, always like to hear feedback from our audiences! I think you're spot on with your observations, we've been working on improving these items in our latest projects so hopefully we will see improvement :) Cheers!

[Rabbit Travel - Happy New Year 2019]

A nice short.
Good Designs and Animation.

VolFMaple responds:

Thank you!

[Montage of all following animations]

You have some good animation skills.

My only gripe,
Is the line quality, which needs to be thinner.
It'll give it a more professional or refined look to your work and designs.

chrisdercheata responds:

thx for the reaction.
The problem is not all the animation are in the same style.
Thats waht i need to improve all animations in the same style , thats nessasary for a trailer,montage or a teaser.

[60 secpnds stuff Objekt]

The character designs were good, but I'd personally make the line quality thinner.
The animation was well executed but not very complex.

Out of curiosity,
What program do you use?
It looked like Adobe Flash.

chrisdercheata responds:

thx for the Reaction.
You are al really active watcher thats nice dude.
It sounds funny maybe but i only use paint and a programm to cut the animation.

[60 seconds stuff update]

Ha
.your from Deutschland,
very cool.

Unfortunately,
I didn't understand a word you were saying except for a few at the end.
It looked informative, none the less.

chrisdercheata responds:

Thx chris for the comment,
thats one of the big changes avideo will follow to this one.
I need to speak englisch and make more animations here.

[deathd]

Good drawings and animation.
Went by pretty fast, but this was nice.

[A Man Goes to the Store to Buy Some Milk]

Too simple...needs more animation, detail, etc.

[TheTrain has Left (Short Doodle)]

The animation was decent and it had charm.

chrisdercheata responds:

Hey Thank You for your Reaction. I see you reacted on other videos of me too.its nice to see guys commented under my videos. Just a view sentences also crtisism is nessascary. I will look and see what's your new content on your channel.

[Pivot Short #1: Sparing]

Stick figure characters need to be fleshed out more.
Barely any animation in this.

StylusBox responds:

I think you made your point.