Bad animation mixed with pixelation.
...and it was very short.
Bad animation mixed with pixelation.
...and it was very short.
Yes. It's too short. I agree...
Really liking that hip hop beat.
Animation needs work, but not bad.
thanks, how can I improve on my animation?
Ok designs, backgrounds, and animation.
Good story.
Thank you!
Episode 2 is on it's way... should blow this one out of the water!
Good animation and funny.
Thanks! Feel free to share with yo friends!
Ok Animation,
Ok designs,
Very short.
Thanks for the feedback
Nice background music, it really set the mood well.
I loved the clouds speeding by in the background. It was a really cool touch.
The minimalistic designs really complmented the "wobbly" "fast paced" animation style.
Between the music and animation style, everything just clicked.
Hey, thank you ChrisMckiernan!
The choice to make everything in illustrator came about because I was teaching someone without drawing skills how to animate.
My friend Jeff did the BG sounds for this cartoon. "Trey leches" on sound cloud.
Everyone's just sticking their head in the hole.
Compared to other "madness" cartoons, this ones pretty lacking.
Not enough violence and it was very short.
Maybe maybe....
Wasn't expecting that at the end.
I'm really liking that background music, it really sets the mood.
Great backgrounds and designs.
I thought that bubble animation in the beginning was really cool.
Good animation.
Wish there was more to it... an ending that was just as climactic as the beginning.
Thank you for the feedback! It’s a cartoon short, there’s going to be a part 2. I think the ending has humor in the irony of the story. He’s sent on this grand majestic mission then dies at the end. But yeah it’s kinda set up for part 2, TBD. Thank you again, Chris!
Animation is between bad and ok, so its like "eh".
The music "sort of" matches with the animation.
My favorite sites that have the best music without copyright issues are
Incompetech.com and Bensound.com.
The audio quality isn't good
Character designs and backgrounds are really bad.
care to provide any actual feedback, or are you just going to say "it was bad"
Because that sir is your opinion, and one I disagree with
Ok animation.
Cheesy story.
Bad video quality.
Bad designs.
Thank you for you very constructive critcism
i REALLY appreciate it......
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